Eyes on me

Coffeecans · #1 26-01-2013, 12:18 AM

There I sat on my bed, facing the windows. Staring at the heavy rain that flooded the canals and the ground. Everything was blurred by the heavy downpour which fitted what I was feeling now. My hand reached for the small ikea black photo frame, featuring the two of us. Ferline and me. She was my everything.

Feminine, with a pair of large brown eyes, pointed cheekbone, and a pair of luscious pink lips. Her hair was naturally wavy and thick, and to hide it, she would always tie it up.

Seeing her smile in the photo of us sent that bolt of lighting to my heart, numbing every single channel that pumps blood to it. As I pressed the photos towards my heart, I closed my eyes.

Reminiscing the past with her.

The door opened and Hilda came in, holding a cup of hot ginger tea, specially prepared for me.

Me: Get Out! Get outtt!

I threw whatever pillow I had on my bed towards her, except the photo frame which was firmly clamped using my arm towards my chest. Hilda dropped the tea and the hot liquid scalded her feet as she held her feet in pain, the cup was shattered all over the floor. I turned my head and stared out of the window again. Holding that black frame. It was the only thing that could give me the comfort I need.

The reflection of the glass revealed that lifeless side of me. Unkempt hair, unshaven goatie, lifeless eyes. Everyday was like a dead end to me.

Hilda picked herself up, vacuumed the broken glass and went quietly to the kitchen. She placed her hands on the kitchen sink, and trembled. Her body shivered and tears rolled down her frame.

She then composed herself and poured another glass for me to drink. As she walked towards me, handing me the cup of water, my hands forcefully hit the glass as it flew off her hands.

Me: Cut the pretendence! I don't want to see you! Out!

Hilda: It has already been so long... why?

Me: Shut up!

Yes. Ferline is dead. And today was her first death anniversary.

kingking28 · #2 26-01-2013, 12:23 AM

pitch tent

ANowhereMan · #3 26-01-2013, 12:23 AM

Condolences. I hope you're alright bro.

Meow^^ · #4 26-01-2013, 12:25 AM

Another great story in the making...cheers bro....

gotnotime · #5 26-01-2013, 01:16 AM

Yay another great story in the making!

Coffeecans · #6 26-01-2013, 02:03 PM

Hilda was my childhood friend. We grew up in the same neighbourhood. She was petite with long dense hair, wears frameless glasses, with natural rosy cheeks, small almond shaped eyes with full lips. She was quite the 'belle' in school with no lack of suitors courting her. But she had always remained single. And I didn't know why.

Ferline on the other hand was one of her best friends, they always go out together, studying, shopping and playing. We were studying in different faculties. I was doing some research at the college library where I saw both of them discussing some projects on the table.

Me: Hey Hilda!

Hilda: Hi Max!

I couldn't keep ny eyes off Ferline, despite seeing her for the first time.

Hilda: Ooi... OOI Max! Quit looking at her like that! Keep your eyes on the beautiful me ok! Hummph!

Hilda's voice was so loud that the students turned their heads and looked towards to where the sound was coming from. And there was Hilda, standing up with her hands on her hips.

Max: Oops. Sorry.

I bowed to apologize.

Hilda: That's better. This is Ferline. My best buddy.

Me: Hi Ferline. I'm Max.

I couldn't help by kept my eyes on her. She wasn't really that pretty, but its her eyes which captivated me. The pair could communicate even without speaking. Ferline just gave me a smile. That Mona Lisa smile I could keep locked inside my brain permanently.

I knew I had this affinity with her. And I wanted to know her more. It felt that we had knew each other for some time. I had to excuse myself after finding the research I need.

Before I left, Hilda shouted again.

Hilda: Max! I see you at the gates at 530pm! Let's go back together!

Sigh the 'chor lor' side of her never change. I nodded and waved goodbye, stealing another glance at Ferline.

And there I got the Mona Lisa smile again.

genesis01 · #7 26-01-2013, 03:30 PM

Can't take my eyes off.......all ur stories!

Coffeecans · #8 26-01-2013, 06:30 PM

Hilda: Ooi! What are you thinking about?

Hilda patted my shoulders which made me jump in shock, nearly dropping the batch of project files on my hands.

Me: Don't scare me like that!

Hilda sticked her tongue out and behind her was Ferline, giggling softly. I felt that tad of embarrassment, trying to compose myself.

Me: We are going home together?

Hilda: Of course! Ferline and me are doing our project together. You have two babes accompanying you home. Happy or not?

*Of course I am*

This was a good time to know more about Ferline.

Walking happily to the bus stop and boarding the bus, that Hilda was blabbering nonstop about how clumsy I was when I was young, and the embarrassing moments. I could feel my shade of red turning darker and darker. Hilda and Ferline was sitting behind me, and I could hear that sift giggle. Ferline was the total opposite of Hilda. Real ladylike unlike the super loud girl.

Half of my life stories were thrown before we reached our destination. AS we were walking past the coffeeshop, Hilda suddenly stopped.

Hilda: Ooi Max, walk with Ferline to my block. I'm packing some pratas!

I nodded. Of course spending time with Ferline alone would be the most ideal. I smiled. We walked slowly and I offered to take her files and she agreed.

Me: Sorry about that loudspeaker. She's always like that.

Ferline: That's her bubbly character. Beside its interesting to know about you.

I blushed again.

Me: Do you happen to live around here?

Ferline: Nope. I live in the East.

Me: Its a distance from here to there. Perhaps you want to give me your number. If you are going to work late with Hilda, I can send you home ba.

She looked at me in surprise and smiled. She took my mobile and typed her number.

I quickly saved her number and put it back to my pocket when the loudspeaker yelled.

Hilda: Oooi! You two walk like turtles! And hey, you are carrying Ferline's folders. Here! Carry mine too!

Hilda threw her bag onto my forearm, carrying the fodlers to fall and I picked it up clumsily.

Ferline wanted to help but Hilda stopped her.

Hilda: Let him do it. He's our servant!

I continued walking behind them before I reached Hilda's block. She then took her bag and waved goodbye.

I made my way home happily. For I have Ferline's number.

The question was. Was she attached?

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Coffeecans · #9 27-01-2013, 09:16 PM

There were just so many questions ringing on my head. The first thing I did on my way home was sms her, letting her know my number.

Me: It's me Max. Don't work too late k?

She replied almost immediately: Sure.

I quit texting her too much in case Hilda saw the message and went on doing my own stuff and taking a short afternoon nap.

I must have been dead tired. I woke up around 8 plus by a message that made me jump in fright.

Ferline: Max, you there? You mind sending me home? It's quite late already.

Without even hesitating, I replied: Yes! I wait for you at Hilda's void deck?

Ferline: Thanks Max.

Now my heart was thumping. Yes!

Me: Daddy can I borrow your car? Need to send a friend home.

Dad: Ok. Be careful ok.

Me: Yesh!

I grabbed the car keys and was on my way, and there Ferline was standing, waiting for me.

I waved my hands and she managed to see me.

She ran towards my car and I could see her hair swinging and her breasts bouncing with her body which gave me an erection. But I tried to hide it.

Ferline: Hi Max.

The very softness of her voice made my day. I smiled back and asked her address and drove off.

And it was the first time I had supper with her.

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LovePotion · #10 27-01-2013, 09:36 PM

u r great.... pls carry on thanks

LuckyStrikes · #11 27-01-2013, 10:08 PM

Good story, support

Coffeecans · #12 27-01-2013, 10:48 PM

Ferline was wearing her red spag with a push up bra to flaunt her deep cleavage. Her hair was nicely tucked behind her ears, with a pair of shining crystal hanging down. Her short pants revealed her slender legs which was a huge turn on to me.

Me: What do you feel like eating?

Ferline: I'm not too sure, you have any recommendations?

Me: Shall we head to You Tiao Wang? The food is quite nice there.

Ferline: Sure.

Her Mona Lisa smile again. Whenever I see that my legs will go wobbly.

I ordered quite a spread and she was surprised.

Me: You always do projects till so late?

FL: No choice, so many things to do, so little time.

Me: I see. So hows the progress?

FL: Good I guess. Perhaps a few more discussions and we are good to go!

Me: Nice!

And there I was trying to dig something from her. I pretended to look around cautiously.

FL: Max, are you alright?

Me: I'm checking, just in case your boyfriend sees us.

She giggled.

FL: I'm single Max.

Puts on acting skills again.

Me: Say what?

FL: I'm single.

Me: Oh wow for a gorgeous girl like you its unbelievable.

FL: Don't be silly Max. I'm not gorgeous. No one wants me.

Me: I want!

I didn't know why but I shouted. The entire group of people turned their heads, facing my direction and see me turned red. Ferline giggled again. Dipping the doughsticks into her soya milk.

FL: Perhaps I could take it as a compliment Max. Your girlfriend gonna kill me if she hears this.

Me: I'm single too Ferline. And available.

She laughed.

FL: Isn't that Hilda your girlfriend? You two are always so lovely dovey.

Me: No. She is my childhood friend. I've always treated her as my sister. Really. Believe me.

FL: Hahaha.. ok I believe you. But did you know why Hilda's still single?

Me: *Scratches head* Why?

FL: I think you must have been a dumbbell. Can't you see from her actions? She likes you Max. She has been rejecting countless guys because of you.

Me: ....

I gobbled down my food and kept quiet.

Me: There are just some things that is not destined to be.

She smiled.

We chatted and I sent her home.

Before she turned her back, I wind down the window, stuck my head out.

Me: Ferline...

FL: Yes?

Me: Ermm. Do... Do... you think we can go out together like today?

She gave me that smile again and nodded before she ran to the lift.

*yesh! yesh! yesh! woohoo! woohoo! hurray hurray!*

My heart was springing up with sunshine, and I looked forward to seeing her again.

My phone rang and it was Hilda.

Hilda: Ooi! Where are you? I'm hungry. Wanna meet at our usual supper place?

Me: I'm tired Hilda. Perhaps next time?

Hilda: You always tired one! Hmpph. No more appetite already. NIGHT!

And she hung the phone already.

Why was I getting the feeling that Hilda thought we were an item?

Halfway through my journey, my phone rang and there was this message from Ferline.

FL: Thanks for sending me home Max. See you again. Good night. Sweet dreams.

Ahh.. this short and sweet message had already left me on cloud nine.

I want to see you again Ferline.

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alan0338 · #13 28-01-2013, 11:02 AM

camp here ...

wolf2305 · #14 28-01-2013, 11:50 AM

Another great story on the way. Bro TS, you should start writing all this into a book.

studdyme · #15 28-01-2013, 12:25 PM

camping for more!