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#91
08-03-2013, 03:26 AM
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Re: Eyes on me
Your nick is like guarenteed best seller
Seriously amazed by your imagination and writing skills. With more practice you might be Singapore's next Al Steiner!! 
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#94
08-03-2013, 11:20 AM
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There are no saints in a sex forum... if you can read this, despite your claims of merely being a passerby/lurker/silent reader, you are already tainted and have been corrupted.... welcome to the darkside !!!
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#95
09-03-2013, 12:51 PM
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Epilogue.
I left the world, holding Ferline's hands. The world was spring and beautiful. And it seemed that the whole only belonged to the both of us. The heavy rain continued as Hilda screamed. A crowd surrounded the scene. My mother just happened to return from the market and surprised to see the crowd. She went to see what was happening. The metal soup container that she carried dropped to the floor and scattered all over with melons, dates and pork ribs. Max's mum: Max!!!!!!!! Ahhhhh! Max!!!! Wake up! Wake up! Hilda cried even louder. It was too late. I wasn't responding and they pronounced me dead. The death timing was exactly the same as Ferline's. Same date, same time and a year's difference. Hilda was too shocked to even say anything. Ferline's parent were informed and it was then my parents and Ferline's decided to place us side by side. Hilda changed. She devoted herself fully to her church nowadays and volunteered in every charity work. She still went to talk to me and Ferline, updated us about how she is doing now. She often dreams of us and is now happily married with two kids. As for us, we were still the same and I enjoy each and every moment with Ferline. My love. Coffeecans Reads http://sbfsg.agency/showthread.php?t=345351
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#98
09-03-2013, 03:51 PM
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Another fantastic read bro! Thanks n now looking forward to your next. Cheers, ..........
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#101
09-03-2013, 11:19 PM
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thats a ood one keep it up
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#102
13-05-2013, 05:24 PM
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Re: Eyes on me
Hey bro, classic story. I shed a tear! ;'[
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#103
20-06-2013, 02:02 AM
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Re: Eyes on me
After reading this, I realised it is a sad but happy every after ending
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