My auntie and I

[waterbottle99]

welcome back oh TS! Please continue!

[BCL25]

Bro TS, welcome back, always enjoy ur story

[CloneXXX]

Welcome back TS, have been waiting very long for you to continue..

[FuckPussy]

Thank you very much. I do wish that you would put a closure to your story and If you have a better second part, then start another new story. I really really really really enjoyed what your wrote. really, Thanks

[grouchycabi]

Hi Bro FuckPussy

There's a lot more to this story if you guys are interested. Not sure what do you mean by putting a closure to it...?

[xXXXx77]

Welcome back bro TS and thank you for continuing e story. Looking forward to e rest of e story.

[ml1138]

bro TS, so you are finally back...thank for sharing.

[grouchycabi]

Sigh.

I got zapped by this person who left this message:

"04-12-2011 11:33 AM sorry for making everyone wait".

Sigh. I thank all those bros who appreciate my story and who had upped me with their precious points. I think it is really uncalled for to zap people at your whims and fancy. I was in the midst of the continuation of the story when I found out about the zap. I had extended my apologies to all for the long delay but my first priority is still to put food on the table for my family, right?

Sigh. Why you so like that? I am sure you had read my story and enjoyed it? If there is anything you don't like, please let me know. I shall try to improve in whatever ways I can.

[wahlau_7]

Originally Posted by grouchycabi

Sigh.

I got zapped by this person who left this message:

"04-12-2011 11:33 AM sorry for making everyone wait".

Sigh. I thank all those bros who appreciate my story and who had upped me with their precious points. I think it is really uncalled for to zap people at your whims and fancy. I was in the midst of the continuation of the story when I found out about the zap. I had extended my apologies to all for the long delay but my first priority is still to put food on the table for my family, right?

Sigh. Why you so like that? I am sure you had read my story and enjoyed it? If there is anything you don't like, please let me know. I shall try to improve in whatever ways I can.

I upped u 14 pts to make up for the points lost. Please carry on.

[FuckPussy]

I even worse, I only got three points....lol

[peanut123]

Hi Bro

Thanks for continuing your story, and in appreciation I have upped your pts.

But your writing style seems to have changed, and I feel it's not as realistic. No woman, when describing her traumatic past, is ever going to utter words like "my soft protruding mound of my pussy" and "my firmly ripened breasts" to describe an attack on her body. These words work well for a narrative, but not as quotes attributed to a female victim.

Hope your next installment is more believeable.

Besides that, thanks for continuing your story.

Originally Posted by grouchycabi

“Ok, you don’t want the red dress? What do you want me to wear now?” I replied innocently. “Yes, we are done with the red dress. Now I just want you to wear your underwear.” The photographer smiled wickedly. I was shocked! Up to that point, I had never let any man see me in my underwear! Now in front of a stranger, a man I hardly knew, I was told to strip to my intimate underwear. I felt uneasy immediately and wanted to leave the place.

“No, I think I cannot. I...I...want to go home already. This is enough for me...” I stammered, getting more frightened as the man stepped towards me. I became terrified and backed hastily toward the wall, as if some sort of security was offered by the wall at my back, though there was no way out except through the door behind the photographer. I stopped moving backwards only when my back touched the wall. There was nowhere else to go.

Suddenly, with no warning, the man reached out to me and, with a coarse sneering laugh, gripped the flimsy red dress in one rough hand and, with a quick twist, yanked the garment from my smooth shoulders, ripping it in half like it was a strip of tissue paper. I stood all but naked before his eagerly probing eyes, as much confused and astonished as frightened, and only my soft protruding mound of my pussy was still hidden from his cold appraising stare by my thin panties.

I had earlier removed my bra as the strap was showing when I wore the red dress! Shit! I immediately crossed my arms over my firmly ripened breasts and stirred uncomfortably, uneasy under the sudden coldness of his gaze. He stared down the smooth curves of my voluptuous young body, my high jutting breasts and long shapely legs, all clearly visible to his obviously appraising cruel stare.

“Please, please, “ I begged, and my melon-firm white breasts heaved with every agonizing plea. “What are you doing? You cannot mean this! This isn’t right, you just cannot! Please!”

Tears streamed from the corner of my eyes as I hoarsely begged for mercy, but there was not a hint of hesitation in the photographer’s eyes...he knew what he wanted, and he would get it. It was just a matter of time.

[Kalv]

Originally Posted by wahlau_7

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Happy "Sammyboyfor 10th Anniversary Celebration"! Last round - Just upz U: No 3. Merry Christmas & Happy New Year to all. Cheers.

[ladylill2]

Welcome back, nice story

[embraced]

Welcome back bro grouchycabi.. Have read your story when I was still a lurker.. You have very good writing skills!

[FuckPussy]

Originally Posted by FuckPussy

I even worse, I only got three points....lol

Now I got -3 points. I don't think I did anything wrong. Thats' why the points system things is flawed. I hope the admin could see this and understand this part.