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Re: My Brother and Sister in law
Absolutely fantastic story, I particularly like the ending bit. Thank you, bro ilock.
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Being the animal in us, how many times do we remember the feelings from making love? Nice One Bro, I seriously love it |
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Re: My Brother and Sister in law
very nicely written bro, hope you are still having fun with the sisters
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1 of the best writers in SBF, great job!
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Bravo TS. I thought the story is coming up with more vibes but ended with us guessing wats next.
Kudo to the story which made me stuck here for dosage almost everyday. |
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Too good bro. haha excellent as always
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Superb story!
Nice ending! |
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Nice story bro, and a great ending. Love it!!
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#549
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Hooked from the start till the end! Already missing the sylvia, james and gillian! Excellent job to TS!
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Re: My Brother and Sister in law
Great story , thanks for sharing
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Re: My Brother and Sister in law
Thank you for the kind words.
Good to know you guys enjoyed it. There are a lot of good writers in the forum, just that everybody's style and way of expression is a little different. Will be staying on the sidelines for a bit of R & D . Hope i can gather enough sick thoughts soon for another piece. ock out. |
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Re: My Brother and Sister in law
Truly excellent, your stories are well thought thru, with excellent pacing, suspense and twists.
Looking forward to more bro! |
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Re: My Brother and Sister in law
Thanks bro ILOCK for this wonderful story.. Good job and hope to see more of your work soon..
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Re: My Brother and Sister in law
I got zapped for my comment... what the...
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Re: My Brother and Sister in law
Maybe someone clicked the wrong option.
Added my humble 3 points to yours. |
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