My Brother and Sister in law

[lahchi]

Bro,

awesome story nice ending..comes to a full circle...i love all your stories..i thought nothing could beat the pinoy revenge story but man this is just superb

cant wait for your next story...

Originally Posted by ilikeoldchangke

Thank you for reading.

I hope you enjoyed the thread.



Yes it's a work of fiction, but the characters were inspired by someone close to me.

Pictures wise, i really bought a hardisk from a gambler. haha.



Appreciate the comments guys, Happy friday.

[miniboy]

Originally Posted by rob_onny

Bro ajlover, I also think James will take over Joe's role...
But I hope not the gamble part...
Bro ilikeoldchangke, pls give me part 2!!!
Trilogy!! Trilogy!!!

Yes Part 2, Part 2 please

[rob_onny]

Bro ilikeoldchangke, i was coincidentally listening to a MP3 song while reading one part of ur story (shown below)...

my heart sunk, sunk & sunk especially with that song playing in my ears...
this time, I don't have solid hotdog... I nearly have tears emerging instead...

Anyway bro, that song is Tell me what you want me to do (Tevin Campbell)...
may b u'll feel the same listen to it while reading the below...

I already starts to miss James, Gillian, Sylvia & u (bro ilikeoldchangke)...
Trilogy!! Trilogy!!!

Originally Posted by ilikeoldchangke

......
12th December 2010
Sunday
Sylvia’s birthday.
......
10.15am

I was late but Sylvia still had a smile on her face when I got to the station.
She seemed like she wanted to ask where we are heading but I just motioned for her to hop onto the train.

The train was not pack, we still manage to get comfortable standing space but Sylvia stood close to me.

What was amazing was that we did not exchange a single word from the moment we met till we entered the train.

We just stared at each other with a smile.

It was as if the entire world was just passing us by, and we just kept that silly smile on our face until the train reached City hall.
......
Sylvia tagged closed to me, I could feel her fingers tugging onto my shirt as we crossed the platform with a mass of other passengers.

I had that sweet sourish feeling of a first date, at the same time I had that bitter after taste of betrayal.

I forced myself to concentrate as I did not want to spoil my sister in law’s birthday.

11.15am
......
James : Are you hungry ?

She nodded her head and I let her towards the stand alone dome beside the stadium. We took a slow walk, our fingers intertwined and the smile never left Sylvia’s face.
......
It felt like we were out on a first date.

She was sweet, gentle and there were a couple of traits she had that Gillian did not.

Sylvia was much more demure in her overall behavior.

There was always a smile on her face.
......
12.45pm
......
As we entered the mall, there was a bridal booth and the person in charge immediately came towards us, asking if we’re married.

I smiled and was about to reject him totally but Sylvia took over the pamphlet, reading through the contents before saying she’ll consider.

James : haha. Siao ar ?

Sylvia : Would you do it with me if I wanted to ?

We stepped onto the escalator and I retreated a step below Sylvia before my arms went around her waist, I hugged her as we ascended , pressing my face onto her tummy, smelling her perfume.
......
James : If it’s overseas, and for your eyes only, I would do it.

She laughed and returned my hug as we stepped off.

We bought tickets and caught a movie , Tron. The couple seat was a waste of money as Sylvia and I were literally hugging onto each other as we shared a single shawl she brought along.

4.30pm
......
Sylvia : Oh my god… I did not know such a thing exists.

James : That’s the most bimbo thing I’ve heard from you the entire day. Haha

She jabbed me in the ribs and we shared a rod.
......
5.50pm
......
I peeled and fed Sylvia, as her hands never left my arms as she hung on to me like a koala bear.

6.15pm

I brought her across the road to the park which was filling up with joggers and we took a slow stroll, enjoying the evening breeze.

We chatted and laughed, and yes we kissed at a quiet pavilion near the road.

7.00pm

I hailed a cab and i directed us to sim lim square.

Sylvia : Why are we heading there ?

James : You’ll see.

It was as if we knew instinctively that town was a dangerous zone, our hands parted but we still kept close to each other.

I led her on a slow walk towards Albert court hotel.

When I lingered at the entrance, Sylvia slapped me on my tummy as she laughed and hugged me at the roundabout drop off point.

I checked in with Sylvia by my side and we went up to the 6th floor.
......
9.15pm

I made the first move .

We did not have sex, we did not fuck, but we made love.

It was one of the most beautiful encounter I’ve ever had.

I eased myself in and out of Sylvia, her eyes twinkled with each thrust.

I did not have condoms, and Sylvia did not mind.

9.45pm

I paused , the questioning look in my eyes and Sylvia nodded, reassuring me that it’s alright to do it. Our lips met and I trembled and filled Sylvia’s love hole with my essence. Squirting myself deep into her recess.

10.30pm
......
James : I have something for you.

I brought out a simple bracelet and presented it to Sylvia.

Sylvia : I love it James… thank you ..

[Sunshine_apple]

Appreciate your effort in writing. Nice ending.... Thanks.

[ilikeoldchangke]

Originally Posted by rob_onny

Bro ilikeoldchangke, i was coincidentally listening to a MP3 song while reading one part of ur story (shown below)...

my heart sunk, sunk & sunk especially with that song playing in my ears...
this time, I don't have solid hotdog... I nearly have tears emerging instead...

Anyway bro, that song is Tell me what you want me to do (Tevin Campbell)...
may b u'll feel the same listen to it while reading the below...

I already starts to miss James, Gillian, Sylvia & u (bro ilikeoldchangke)...
Trilogy!! Trilogy!!!

Not bad. got the feel i wanted to bring out.




Try this one.

Read the same parts.

I wanted to plug this song into the story initially, especially the part when James was out with Sylvia but gave up in the end.

[rob_onny]

Bro ilikeoldchangke, may b u can try inserting this link: Almost (Tamia)...

Bro, pls give me... Trilogy!! Trilogy!!!

Originally Posted by ilikeoldchangke

Not bad. got the feel i wanted to bring out.

Try this one.

Read the same parts.

I wanted to plug this song into the story initially, especially the part when James was out with Sylvia but gave up in the end.

[Hardaway1818]

Wow I love your ending. Written so beautifully. Classic.

All I can say is a "wow"

[Spud_Boy]

I kinda like the ending when it's seems like a whole circle ending where it started from...

nice touch... this is definitely a script worth turning into a movie...

[curiouslala]

wah lau..
abit sad when its ends leh..
y cannot continue the affair la?
maybe MMF with wayne?

[Snuber]

Nice ending bro! Something unexpected.....

Somehow with that ending, it brings to mind.... Did Joe ever had something similar with Gilian? Hmmmmmm.....

Someone suggested a trilogy, but I feel this is the best way to end this story on a high note..... Perhaps a short note to let all your fans know the current status of the various characters to satisfy their hunger....

[eeemen]

Splendid writing and a wonderfully twisted ending. History repeats itself, eh? Enuf said. Just keeping it as simple as possible, >>>>

A BIG thank you, bro ilock. Cheers, ...............

[thirsty]

a unique style of telling a story.
very captivating.

Thank you for the story bro

[pttd]

Originally Posted by ilikeoldchangke

Thank you for reading.

I hope you enjoyed the thread.

Yes it's a work of fiction, but the characters were inspired by someone close to me.

Pictures wise, i really bought a hardisk from a gambler. haha.

Appreciate the comments guys, Happy friday.

Bro, thank for writing such a wonderful story.

Now got more free time to surf SBF and read some excellent stories by Bros and really appreciated it.

[tikogoh]

Originally Posted by MagicFingers

Almost similar situation when James first met the FIL and Joe, and now James is taking over the role of Joe as some other brothers have mentioned.

Thank you iloveock for an amazingly wonderful story. I had goosebumps when I read the ending, and went "Woaaaaah" while working. >,< Will camp for your next story / adventure. Wish you all the best! !

Yeah and James definitely won't make the same mistakes as Joe.

Wayne seems so innocent. Nice story though

[LongGone]

excellent story bro, it's utterly amazing!!! can't wait for you to better yourself...