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yes!!!!this is the way Bro. ...write more.....awaiting for the next update
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We finish breakfast as I was observing the girls, seriously who can make out that they were Sisters, Ann clear up after breakfast and when I offered the help she told me that is was ok, but on the other hand Jasmine just left it Ann to do the clearing and started walking around my home look at that random things.
We sat on the sofa after Ann had finished clearing the table. Jasmine: You seem fine. Me: I told you that I was fine. Jasmine: Sonia told us it was horrific, it was to the point that you were at least crippled or something. Ann: Yup, Jasmine thought you were going to die. Me: Oh that is why she cried. Jasmine: Are we seriously going there again. Me: no but I tell you I will keep this voicemail as long as I live. (did not happen as pager accounts were later all suspended) Jasmine gave me the whatever look and I was enjoying every moment of playing her down. The girls asked to see my wounds and I felt like a exhibit, yesterday was Felicia, Then Christina and now the sisters. I took off my top, Ann did not touch my bruises and was asking me if it was painful, Jasmine did not asked anything and just commented that it does not look painful. Me: What not painful? you try lor let ppl whack. Jasmine punched me light on the arm. Jasmine: Be a Man for god's sake. Me: Eh, enough seeing. So the voicemail how? I already extend till today for you hor. Jasmine: You ask Ann, you always rebut me Ann: We let you decide.. Me: Ok lor, I held Ann's her and pulled her walking to my room. Jasmine: where you two going. I decide mah, since Ann tell me then I decide her lor. Jasmine followed us and I closed my door before she could come in. Me: Sorry my GF today is Ann.... |
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Jasmine: I am not interested in joining the two of you.
Me: Ok lor then you go sit at the sofa. I closed the door fully and I asked Ann to be seated on the bed. I whispered to her that I was going to disturb Jasmine farther and smile and asked me on what did I plan to do. Me: oh.......... oh..... not there Ann.....!!! Ann was giving me a puzzled look as I placed my finger on my lips asking her to remain quiet Me: oh.... yes there Ann... I quietly moved to the door and opened it in a swift motion. Jasmine was standing there and I looked at her with a smile on my face. Me: enjoying what you were hearing? I thought you are not interested. Jasmine: I was just bored outside. Me: like that, you know you can come in if you asked nicely. Jasmine mumbles: Can I go in too, I am bored. Me: Huh? She barges in and it did hurt me a little. there was no sex that morning but lots of teasing and disturbing of both Ann and Jasmine in the room. nothing more than harmless tickles but for me it became painful at times. But at ard 1020am all things changed when I received a voicemail. Sonia Voicemail: Virgin, Christina tell me she coming to find Cindy. Last edited by Starter; 03-06-2016 at 07:59 PM. |
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Ah Lian vs Ah Lian!!!!
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跟家人爭,爭贏了,親情沒了;跟愛人爭,爭贏了,感情淡了;跟朋友爭,爭贏了,情義沒了。爭的是理,輸的是 情,傷的是自己。 |
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I knew I need to be there, I could not leave Christina alone. I told the Jasmine and Ann about the voicemail, asking them to go back.
Jasmine: then what you want to go down? Me: Then let Christina Face them on her own? Jasmine: Please.. you don't always need to be the hero. Me: You don't know one lah, It's not about being a hero. Jasmine: We are not letting you go, you have injuries. Ann too gave me a worrying look but I knew she would agree if I insisted. I asked Ann to leave me and Jasmine alone for a while as I think we need to talk over this, She left the room closing the door after she went out. I knew I needed to overpower Jasmine and I walked towards her as I spoke Me: Jasmine, Please I cannot let Christina go alone. Jasmine: No, even Christina won't approve of this. Jasmine backed to the edge of my room and I placed her shoulder. Me: I remember Ann saying I am the one to decide. Jasmine: That's what Ann said, not me. Me: Jasmine, Can I decide? Jasmine: ok you can go, But we go with you. I smiled at Jasmine. Me: thank you. In the end , the two girls followed me to Sonia's School at Yio Chu Kang. Christina was there and in my mind I was think what is she doing coming alone. (for that moment I will say that Christina was more gutsy than me) |
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slightly late. still will support TS for his hard work! thank you
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Eh find the fucking link lah? Post it here lah? People contribute story and all you know how to do is to criticise. Nabei at least show appreciation for TS to start the story and write it all the way until now. Who gives a fuck if it is his own story or not. Be grateful for what you have, fucking dimwits.
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Christina was standing in front of the school gate as we approach, She seem calm and ready for anything that comes in her way. I asked the girls to wait in the side as I move towards her.
Me: Eh why you come alone? Christina: Why you here? and I am not alone Felicia is with me. I was in such a fluster that I forgot to contact Felicia. Me: Sonia told me and I cannot just let you do this alone, Jasmine and Ann also here, But where is Felicia? Christina: She went to find Sonia, Later you don't say anything just stand one side. Me: Why? Christina: This is Zhar bor dai chi (girl's Issue) As it was the end of normal school hour students pour out of the school, from far I see Felicia and Sonia running towards us. Felicia: Idiot, you also come ah. Me: Yah, Sonia paged me, Jasmine and Ann are over there. Felicia: why you bring them, aiyah nevermind lah you take Sonia and stay with them. Me: Orh. Soon Cindy and Penny emerge from the school with a couple of girls, Cindy exchanged stares with Christina and that stare did not break through out. Cindy walks up and smirks as she see Felicia. Cindy: Why yesterday one got whack still not enough ah? Piak, Christina slaps Cindy across the face. Christina: you are Orh Pah's(Black Panther's) God sister? I am Christina!! I came to tell you don't touch my sister. Cindy: Sister? who is your sister? Christina: Sonia lah. Cindy: Sonia join my gang willingly , you can ask her. Christina you know the rules, you think I school ECA ah, she like she join me, she don't like she walk off. Cindy slaps Christina, and I was clenching my fist. more students were gathering around us and Christina suggested that they talk at another place. Cindy ask told Christina to follow her, we followed behind closely. I felt Sonia holding onto my arm tightly and I figure she was afraid. We reached a block and Cindy told us to go to the highest level warning Christina not to run, Christina told her not to worry she will be there. we took a Lift to the highest level where Christina continued her "negotiation" With Cindy. Christina: So how then you will let Sonia off. Cindy: you want Sonia, I can give her back no problem, but if she get into trouble in school that one I don't know. Christina: Cindy, Mai ka Xia Lan! (dun be too cocky) Cindy: Lim bu tio si xia lan, lu ber ah ne kwan! (I am Cocky, what can you do) Sonia starts crying and telling me to ask Christina to forget it. Cindy: don't say I don't give you chance, I Jio you 1 on 1. winner have the say swee bo? (steady?) Before Christina replied Cindy has already swung punches at her, This was the first time I saw a Cat Fight, Seriously don't imagine Maggie Q style of fighting, it was messy hair pull scratch and of course my personal favourite ripping of shirts. we watched on as Christina fought Cindy, Christina they were in a tussle, and both of them had their uniform buttons ripped off, as much as I was concerned over Christina, I was enjoying the view, I never notice Cindy got nice assets. Back to the fight Christina won and managed to pin Cindy on the ground, She made her promise not to bother Sonia again. But when she released Cindy, Penny and the girls following Cindy ran forward and attacked Christina. Sonia was the first to run forward hugging Christina, while Jasmine and Ann went forward to pull the girls away. Felicia was kicking Cindy who was wore out. All I could do was stand and watch as it was Zhar bor Dai Chi. I pressed for the lift as the girls held Christina, Felicia passed Christina a Windbreaker which she wore to cover her torn Shirt. We took the lift down and reached the void deck Christina hugged Sonia telling her it's ok, They were going to Christina's home to help her treat her wounds. Christina told me to send Jasmine and Ann back, which I obliged. We parted our ways and I went off to the station with Jasmine and Ann. Last edited by Starter; 04-06-2016 at 12:16 AM. |
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Dear Reader,
Just place the past behind, as I have given much thought and I agreed with some bros here that there will be haters not matter what. I have been a Silent reader for a long time but however I too have read stories that stopped midway, I now understand why some writers stop writing and the main reason I started writing was that I too have nothing more to read here. no matter what I will keep writing, I might not be as good as others but I hope you guys enjoy. |
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Support you ts! u r the best!
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moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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Learning a lot from your style of writing and story Starter! Keeps me inspired and strive for improvement!!
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