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If there was an entry in the Guinness Book or Records for the fastest billing for a meal; that would have made a very strong challenge. Aaron did everything but run to the cashier to get the billing and payment done before rushing back to Angel to lead her back up to the room. He held her close in the journey up the elevator feeling her heart beating against his chest. Once in the door, he reached for her trying to pull her in for a kiss but she slipped away. “Let me get more comfortable first… we didn’t get dessert just now… I’m in the mood for some ice cream.” With that, she walked into the bathroom and closed the door. He stood staring at the door for a moment before walking towards the telephone and dialed for room service. The ice cream arrived but Angel remained in the bathroom prolonging his wait. Aaron paced the room wondering if he should be so bold as to strip totally or if he should stay dressed. At last, he decided to strip down to his boxers which were how she found him earlier that morning. Finally he heard the door opening and she came out again wrapped in the fluffy towel. This time he took his time to admire her looks. “She really is stunning.” He thought to himself. She smiled alluringly and sauntered over to him. She stop just out of his reach and slowly reached to loosen the towel that was the only obstacle between him and nirvana. He started to reach for her but she slapped his hands away. He understood and let her maintain control of the sequence of things to come. Slowly, she undid the towel and let it slip slowly down her body. Although it was effectively not the first time he was seeing her naked, it was the first time sober. The towel slid past her torso revealing her breast standing proudly, her faintly pink nipples hardening in the cool air-conditioned room. It took way more self control then he felt he had to jump her to suck on those lovely buds that seem to be inviting him to suckle on them like a baby. His eyes followed the reveal as it slipped lower. The inward curve of her tiny waist flared out into her full hips; a perfect hourglass, and finally the valley between her thighs came into view, her pubic region neatly trimmed that he wondered if she went for professional waxing. As the towel finally hit the floor, he groaned as his painfully engorged shaft tented in his shorts. Angel went down on her hands and knees and started crawling towards him. When she reached him, she literally climbed unto him and sat on his lap grinding her hot centre onto his bulging crotch. He groaned aloud at the sensation and she immediately clamped down onto his lips and she kissed him deeply. She wrapped her arms around his head pulling him close. His hands slid up her soft curves and cupped her breast, stroking and pulling on those nipples that just moments ago he was dreaming of sucking on. Before he could do more, she shimmied down his body smiling cheekily at him as she hooked her fingers onto the waistband of his shorts. He lifted his hips to allow her to pull the boxers off freeing his erected manhood from its restricted constraints. She looked at it for a moment as if studying it before reaching for it. She ran her finger along the angry vein that snaked its way up the shaft to the bulbous reddish head of the shaft before grabbing it lightly tugging the skin downwards exposing the entire crown of his uncircumcised penis. Moving in closer, she licked around the crown and it immediately twitched upon the sudden contact caused aftershocks of pleasure coursing through his body. Taking the head into her mouth, she started sucking lightly on it to gauge the effect it would have on him. When he moaned in pleasure, she smiled and started going at it with gusto. Stroking the pulsating member and sucking on it on the outstroke, she knew right there why guys were so obsessed with blowjobs. She also knew that right there was where she literally had him by the balls. She knew that she could get anything out of him just because she could. Without any warning, he thrust his hips upwards and started to unload spurt after spurt of hot molten semen into her waiting mouth. She kept going swallowing at the same time until his body stopped twitching and he rested. She crawled up his body and laid on him and kissed him. Even though he had just cummed in her mouth, he didn’t care, he felt so high and wonderful that he just wanted her close and he wanted to love her and protect her and he just simply kissed her back. |
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Upz a humble point for your effort. Thanks.
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This is so well written, it's as if the writer is a well educated worm or elf within Angeline, following her every move, and it's narrated to us like a story-telling session.
And I can almost visualize every detail, even the puking part was not hard to imagine with your description. LOL TS, you wrote it with real life experience? Thumbs (and dicks) up!
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Not from experience... just an over active vivid imagination and a love of words. Perhaps you can say it's part fantasy, we all like to be part of the process of turning a good girl bad, sub-consciously at least. hahaha.... Just happy that there are some who enjoy the storytelling and the development of the characters as we move along.... who knows if i keep at it, it may even be a novel... lol cheers |
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Thanks bro wild,
you're too kind. appreciate your support. |
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nice story line, enjoy reading.
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As he caught his breath, he pulled her around and laid over her and started kissing her back more aggressively. His hands ran riot on her breast squeezing them lightly while rolling her nipples in the palm of his hands. Slowly, he trailed a wet track of kissed along her neck and finally caught her pebble hard nipple into his mouth sucking on them feeling them grow slightly between his lips. He gave both nipples equal attention and was rewarded by gasps of pleasure from Angel. After what seemed like eternity, he finally decided to move on continuing his journey south towards the Promised Land. Spreading her soft white thighs, he planted soft kisses along her inner thigh which brought soft moans from Angel’s lips. Encouraged, Aaron dived in sucking on puffy lips of her labia, noting that they were slightly red and raw probably from the vigor of the previous night’s activities. Spreading them, he was greeted by a vision that invoked every lustful feeling imaginable from deep within his soul. Her vulva spread inviting toward him blossoming like a flower to the morning sun. Her excitement already coated her waiting and receptive cup yearning to be filled by him. He traced his tongue along her slit; an action that brought shudder on her supine body. Flicking expertly upward along the slit until he hit her sensitive bud, he gave it his all in an attempt to illicit a glorious orgasm from her. Licking, sucking and even giving occasional nips on her hard clitoris, his oral ministrations drove her into throes of ecstasy. Her head thrashed from side to side as moan after moan took her breath away. All too soon, that familiar and eagerly needed tingle gradually built from deep within her loins spreading outwards till her entire body began to feel like it was on fire. Her hips lifted off the bed as her back arched and her muscles went into spasms after spasm as an intense orgasm rocked through her body. She screamed out his name as her thighs squeezed together trapping his head within. It took practically all his strength and focus to keep himself in position and maintain the oral contact with her to ensure that the orgasm followed through and she felt the maximum impact of the intimate gesture. Pulling himself on top of her, Aaron pulled her close as she desperately tried to catch her breath. For a brief moment, he looked into her eyes in wonder and felt like the luckiest man alive to be in the presence of this goddess. Her eyes closed slightly as her body began to relax but Aaron had other ideas. He aligned himself with her and pushed forward. Her eyes popped open at the sudden invasion before closing slightly again as she began to purr seductively at the pleasure of feeling his entire manhood being sheathed inside of her. Aaron moaned as her tight vaginal muscles clamped down onto his shaft enveloping him completely. Slowly he found a soft slow rhythm that took them both on a journey of pure pleasure. As the passion grew, so did the intensity of their love-making. Faster and faster, their bodies started to grind together until the ultimate completion of their union resulted in their bodies climaxing together in a crescendo of ecstasy. Their voices sang in unison as they felt their souls intertwine and the feeling of bliss overtook their senses. They fell together in a heap onto the sodden bedcovers and fell into a blissful sleep still joined together. |
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here to support for bro
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愛一个人 , 要了解 ,也要开解 ; 要道歉,也要道谢 ; 要认错 ,也要改错 ; 要體貼 ,也要體谅 ; 是接受 ,而不是忍受 ; 是寬容 ,而不是縱容 ; 是支持 ,而不是支配 ;是慰问 ,而不是質问 ; 是傾诉 ,而不是控诉 ;是难忘 ,而不是遗忘 ; 是彼此交流 ,而不是凡事交代 ; 是为对方默默祈求 ,而不是向對方诸多要求 ; 可以浪漫 ,但不要浪费 ; 可以隨時牽手 ,但不要隨便分手 ,如果你都做到了,即使你不再愛一個人 , 也只有懷念 ,而不會懷恨 。 简单,知足,幸福的小女人 |
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thanks babe.... you're so sweet.... hope you enjoyed the story
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Just a short update coz was bz this weekend
cont... Smoke floated through the cool night air as a lone figure sat on the chaise by the window staring out into the night sky. Angel took a drag on the cigarette and stubbed it out before turning around to look at the sleeping form of her companion. Aaron had been out since their intense love making session earlier that night. The clock on the nightstand read 4:30am and Angel wondered why she just couldn’t sleep. Her body couldn’t rest and her mind was in constant turmoil. She thought back on the last 24 hours and smiled. Aaron had been sweet. The things they did and acted made it seem as if they were a couple. Being with him was so comforting and everything just seemed right… and yet… there was just something that was holding her back. She couldn’t quite put her finger on it but her gut just told her that she should not… that she could not carry on. She wanted to laugh out loud at her inner battles. She knew why; or she thought she did. Nobody could love a whore like her. She had become nothing more then a common prostitute; no better. In spite of the man; and his friends, date raping her, she continued to have sex with him and acted like his girlfriend. What’s more she had been milking it for everything it was worth. She was not only a whore; she was a slut as well. All she wanted was the sexual gratification, she really didn’t care where or who she got it from. Who would want her now? Who would love her now? Tears started streaming down her face as she continued to study Aaron’s handsome features. She knew he was attracted to her, his actions more then confirmed it; but she knew that she was tainted. She was defective… rotten to the core now. She didn’t deserve him, his love… or anyone else’s for that matter. She was a plaything to be used and abused. She tried her best to fight back the sobs and the rising lump in her throat. She wanted so much to confide in him, to tell him all that was going through her mind but she knew she couldn’t. She wondered if she should leave a note but couldn’t decide what to write. Then she remembered the lyrics to an old song that she used to listen to by the group Heart. “Don’t try to find me, Please don’t you dare, Just live in my memory, You’ll always be there.” She took on last look at Aaron in his slumber and walked out of the room and his life forever. She hated to leave him without saying goodbye but she knew it was the right thing to do. She was doing him a favor; he would be better off without her. Her personal torment was her own; he should not suffer for it. She cried the whole journey home that night and came to only one conclusion “Nobody could love me because she didn’t deserve love; she didn’t deserve happiness. She hated herself for what she had become and yet found it hard to stop for it was like a drug; a drug so strong that she would die without it. For that, she was damned; a damned soul that was destined to lead a lonely existence and doomed to sink to the deepest darkest recesses of hell.” |
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hmmm.... kinda disappointed at the response. Perhaps it's a little too literary, too wordy for the bros here... but what the hell, i'm writing to express myself and have an avenue for my imagination anyway.
cont... The next couple of days went by in a daze. Angel went to work and she conducted her lessons as if nothing had changed yet to the observant, there were distinct differences in Angeline and Angel. While Angeline was friendly, she had always been rather professional in the way she dealt with staff and students; Angel on the other hand was more open, more… flirtatious. There were also subtle changes in appearance; while Angeline favored a more business-like attire, Angel came in with higher hemlines and blouses with several top buttons unbuttoned. While she continued to teach, her mind tended to drift from time to time. Lectures kept her focused but tutorials were a harder proposition. The worse times were in between lessons when she was in her workstation. These were moments when her mind would instantly drift back to the events of the weekend. Every detail, every touch, every feel came back to her in a flurry. She could still taste the warm hard manhood on her lips; in her mouth; her pussy started to pulsate and her clitoris tingled. She remembered being pounded by the guys one after another. The memories were so vivid and so intense that at times, she felt as if she were about to climax right there and then on the spot. Then she remembered Aaron; all his sweetness, his touch, his kisses and she started to tear. She felt the hole in her heart; in her soul. She felt so empty in times like these that she became like an empty shell; a puppet being controlled by the strings of fate. She was inclined to fulfill the desires of her master in whichever way he sees fit. She walked, talked and seemed normal to everyone but she knew that she was but a walking zombie with no love, no feelings. After a week, Angel felt as if she was going out of her mind. She had tried to immerse herself in work but it was impossible. With each passing minute, her yearning grew. It was bad enough that she looked upon her male colleagues as if they were walking dildos her male students were looking more enticing every passing day. Their youth, stamina and vigor only served to make them all the more appealing. There were times when she felt as if she were going to jump on them and rape them. The straw the broke the camel’s back was when her female colleagues and students became more desirable to her. It was bad enough that she was turning into a raving nymphomaniac and slut; it was another to become a sex-crazed lesbian. She felt as if she was going insane. Deep down, she knew what she had to do. It was an itch, simple as that; it was never going to go away, but if you didn’t scratch it, it will become most unbearable. She knew she had to ease the itch and the only way she was going to do that was to give in to that worm in her head…. Or rather her loins; only sexual gratification was going to give her the relief that she craved. That evening, she rushed home after class and took a long hot shower. As she sat naked doing up her make up for the night, she wondered which nightspot would serve her better. She knew that Wednesday nights, like tonight, would be good for Mambo Jumbo in Zouk but the crowd may be a tad young; Dragonfly was a consideration but the crowd could be a tad older; perhaps Zirca would be a good choice. She walked to her wardrobe and stood there wondering what to wear. As she pondered, she realized that her shades were open and the whole world could see her in her naked glory if they so chose to look. Instead of running to close the curtains, she started parading up and down her room. She made every effort to stop and ensure that if anyone were watching, they’d get a full view. As she continued to tease, she found herself getting wet below. “Damn!” she thought to herself, “I think I need a vibrator, perhaps the Magic Fingers from Madame Oui’s website would be good.” In the end, she chose a halter top dress. The neckline plunged almost to her belly and she decided to forego a bra for the evening. Her breast felt free within the soft constraints of the loose top and the constant friction from her nipples brushing against the material made them stand perpetually. Using a belt she lifted the hem higher then it ought to be. She knew that if she twirled, the hem would lift in a spin and it would definitely expose what was below. She contemplated if she should go commando but settled for a g-string instead. She looked herself in the mirror and knew that she was vamping it up and she had to admit to herself that she did look good. |
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i'm still here to read
thanks for update to let me read , lol paiseh make u write wen ur busy =)
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愛一个人 , 要了解 ,也要开解 ; 要道歉,也要道谢 ; 要认错 ,也要改错 ; 要體貼 ,也要體谅 ; 是接受 ,而不是忍受 ; 是寬容 ,而不是縱容 ; 是支持 ,而不是支配 ;是慰问 ,而不是質问 ; 是傾诉 ,而不是控诉 ;是难忘 ,而不是遗忘 ; 是彼此交流 ,而不是凡事交代 ; 是为对方默默祈求 ,而不是向對方诸多要求 ; 可以浪漫 ,但不要浪费 ; 可以隨時牽手 ,但不要隨便分手 ,如果你都做到了,即使你不再愛一個人 , 也只有懷念 ,而不會懷恨 。 简单,知足,幸福的小女人 |
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You have my point. Please fill us, bro.
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I am here to read tooooooooo pls update !!!
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