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Re: Phoenix Commando Squad.
Pls wait. i will write about Ops Gangbang. Story about Sex Team 6, a crack elite squad of SOF raiding an enemy camp. |
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Nice, camping for that
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Usually these stories are uniformly bad. Really primary school calibre sex fiction If you're really good, u will write stories featuring these 'stars' doing unscrupulous things to get roles, casting couch events, mutual sabotage, prostitution with their identities barely or poorly concealed. It'll drive these cb mad especially if the stories contain some truth in it. And those who are even more calefare than calefare will read yr stories with delight. ______ Exchange points got point ma Last edited by sadfa; 16-03-2017 at 12:19 AM. |
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20 gals lined in attention.
LTC Lei : greetings , ladies. welcome to priscon camp. Let me give you warning: you have to do anything we ask of you. You have to endure humiliation and abuse, physical, mental and sexual. This is my last chance to you : do you want out? Gal 1 : Report . LTC Lei: Say. Gal 1: what do you meant by sexual? LTC Lei: you all be stripped naked and raped. Gal 2 : Report LTC Lei: Say. Gal 2: we are training to be efficient fighting force. why undergoes these treatment? LTC Lei: As I say earlier.. you are being sent to enemy prison camp. we are all your enemy. we want to see how you endure and fight off enemy to accomplish your mission. Both gals: Report Ltc Lei: say. Gal 1: we want out. Ltc Lei: very good . (he then saluted to both gals who returned him salute and march out.) Ltc Lei then looked at the rest: anyone want out? Squad: No, Sir Ltc lei : very good. i see some of you are commissioned officers- 2nd Lt , Lt , cpt , Maj.. but your ranks don't count. my assistants here, are NCOs and they rank higher than you in our camp. Get it? few commissioned officers remain silent. SWO Yeo noticed Maj Ye and thrilled to know that she is in squad as well. she wanna treated that major a lesson.... |
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Re: Phoenix Commando Squad.
Concept taken from those China "Tie Zong Bi" ( Special force ) series & brush over with some local names. China Series 3 is named Fire Phoenix, trainer is also called Thunder God.
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Re: Phoenix Commando Squad.
Please continue TS
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b-free, you are correct!
two gals in that show resembles our Mediacorps stars. One look like Cynthia Koh and other look like Ivy Lee. when they stood in attendance, their busts are turn on. I am writing erotic version where gals are get fucked during training. and commissioned officers suffer humiliation under instructors who are lower in ranks. I am learning from someone who once wrote erotic version of San Guo Zhi. |
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Re: Phoenix Commando Squad.
Please continue TS
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Flashback:
Major Ye (then Captain) an assistant manager handled the case of SWO Yeo (then Sgt). Yeo wanted more time to go on leave to care for her sick mother, but Ye refused to give her more time because she had to go by the book. Yeo pleaded but Ye remained firm, saying "This is an order ,Sgt" Yeo felt sad, and saluted Ye. "Yes, Captain" At the result , Yeo was not at the her mother side when she was on deathbed. (continued later... ) http://www.people.com.cn/mediafile/p...1321479464.jpg She look like Ivy Lee http://image.cnwest.com/attachement/...13efcc7d3e.jpg She look like Cynthia Koh http://www.360js.com/pic/20131119/7-131119164144.jpg See their neh neh outlines |
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All gals were on board inside CH-46 Sea Knight , escorted by a pair of UH-1N Hueys with M-60 doorguns.
Reaching the helipad of the Palau Hantu , all gals get off the helicopter and stood in attendance. There were 2 trucks and a jeeps on standby. All gals on board the trucks while Lei and 3 instructors sat on jeep. upon reaching the base , all gals get off and told to move to one of the buildings.. Inside the building hall, the gals stood in attendance. Then Lei apppeared with his large black pet dog. Sgt Li Meixian , dog handler with wide knowledge of dogs, studied the dog very carefully. She whisper to her teammate standing next to her, saying that "this dog is the cross between doberman and wolf. 75% wolf, and 25% doberman. very dangerous and wide sense of smell, run fast and agile'' Lei: Greetings Ladies, welcome to my camp. and this is my dog, Cerbacus. You have to obey anything I and my assistants asked of you. Is that clear?' Squad: Yes, sir Lei: very good. I am now giving dog collars with number and with tracker inside. Yan gave them dog collars . Blue collars are for commissioned officers . White are for NCOs. Lei : put them aroound your necks. all gals put collars around their necks. Lei : now take off your uniforms... all gals looked at each other. |
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Nice story, please continue TS
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Camping camping....
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sorry for not updating .busy overseas.
All gals hesitated for a moment. All instructors echoed Lei's order. and Cerberus barked loudly and bared its teeth.. All gals unbuttoned uniforms slowly , looking fearfully at big dog moving widly amid restraining attempt by Lei with leash. All male instructors were drooling as all gals stripped of their uniform , wearing only green singlets and pants, revealing their busts outlines. SWO Yeo looking at Major Ye.. Lei then ordered gals to strip some more, echoing by male instructors and Cerberus barking loudly.. The gals were hestitating.. Then Major Ye shout "Report" LTC Lei: speak. Major Ye: are we supposed to take off everything till naked? Lei: certainly. Ye: that's against the law. Lei: suppose you are captured by enemy, will enemy care about the laws? No, right? you do as I says. Strip! Ye: in front of those men? Lei: yes! this is enemy camp. don't waste time! Hurry up! Cerberus barking loudly, acting as if it wanted to lung at Ye All the gals removed their pants. revealing their panties.. All male instructors went ''ahh'' ,SWO Yeo look at them annoyingly.. |
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