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Re: A Relationship With 2 Spinster Sisters
getting exciting... waiting.
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Bro, ur story is as good as another writer, Bro Oink Oink, but unfortunately his story ended very abruptly which is pitiful mainly bcos he had so many faithful mbrs glued to his story every day. Ur story is equally good too, imho. Keep it up !
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Ho seh liao!!!! Fire in e two holes! Lols though expected dat but ur fabulous writting makes ppl wanting more!!!
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You are a really fortunate man... so many women to sleep with and no extra commitments. way to go... upz you.
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fire in the holes!
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Re: A Relationship With 2 Spinster Sisters
Chapter 38 – “Just when I thought…..”
“Nah, go and see whether the bed hard or not?” I teased Alice as we entered the room. Walking straight to the bed, she sat down hard and exclaimed, “Not like KL hotel like that…..” hitting the mattress with her hand. “You don’t like hard ah? Why?” I queried. “Aiya, bed hard hard where got nice to sleep one? Like sleeping on batu like that…..” she replied, “I like soft soft. Bed soft, pillow soft, all soft soft. Then sleep shiok mah…..” she remarked. “Hard then better…..” I countered, “Easy can go in. If soft, then how to piak?” I laughed out loud, apparently forgetting there was a tigress lying on the bed. “Oi! Tsk…..” she growled as Amy grinned. Alice stretched herself on the bed, making herself comfortable and not feeling the least pai seh. I caught a glimpse of her black panties as she was wearing a short denim skirt when I sat on the edge of the bed. Amy noticed me looking and remarked “See what hah? Never see before is it? So nice to see one meh?” as she went into the toilet. Alice knew what her sister meant but made no effort to cover up or protect her modesty. I was beginning to feel awkward. I mean, here I am, in a room with two sisters who’re obviously leading me on, and perhaps wanting for something to happen. And me, unsure of what to do next. Just when I missed hearing the prompting voice of the devil in me, I saw him shivering uncontrollably, teeth chattering, as my inner voice kept emptying bucket after bucket of ice cubes into the bathtub with a huge industrial fan blowing at full blast! The poor little bastard’s turning blue….. “This will put out the fire in you and help cool you down…..” my inner voice said to him as he brought the fan even nearer to the tub. Funny, my bro seemed to have shrunk himself and was nowhere to be felt….. “Eh, I go downstairs awhile…..” I told Alice as I stood up and headed for the door. “Go downstairs for what?” she asked, eyes fixed on the TV. “Go downstairs and buy thing lah…..” “Buy what?” “Buy something lah…..”. “Ya, buy what thing?” “Aiya, buy condom lah! Ask and ask, so kaypoh one…..” I replied. “Ya, don’t tell me don’t need, ok?” I quickly added before she could reply. “Aiya, go lah…..” she said, dismissing me with a wave of her hand. I then went down to get a packet of rubber. I’d usually be having a raging hard-on by then, under such circumstances, but funny thing is, I wasn’t in the least excited over what was about to materialise. Seems that the ice cubes had also affected my little bro. But I didn’t check to see if he too, had turned blue….. “Why? Who’s that?” I asked, as I saw the both of them reading a text message. They had a very worried look on their faces and weren’t speaking. Passing the phone to me, I looked at the message. Damn text was in Chinese characters and I can’t understand it. Handing the phone back to Amy, I asked, “Who’s that?”. “Lim…..” Amy replied, her face turning pale. “Why? What’s wrong with him?” “I think he want to commit suicide…..” Alice replied, her voice quivering. “WHAT??” I asked, in shock. “What you mean he want to commit suicide?” I asked. Amy too was trembling and sat on the bed to steady herself. “He text say he love me very much and cannot live without me,” she said, “If he don’t have me, then he say he don’t want to live anymore…..” she continued. “Is he serious?” I asked, hoping that it was only a threat to get Amy back. “Donno. He sound serious. Ask me to take care of myself and visit his son…..” Amy paused, before breaking down and crying. “Call him!” I told her firmly. “Call him now! Ask him where is he…..” I said. “Also in Hotel 81…..” Alice chipped in. “Hotel 81? Which one? Where??” I asked. “Donch know? He say he’s in hotel 81, somewhere in Geylang. But never say which one…..” she replied. “How? Any answer?” I looked at Amy as she shook her head and redialled the number repeatedly. Keeping a level head, I had to remain calm so as to be able to think rationally on what’s the next thing we ought to do then. Amy’s sobbing was getting louder now, desperate as she couldn’t get through to Lim. “You sure he say he’s in Hotel 81?” I asked again and they both nodded their heads. I quickly rushed out and went down to the reception. Giving them a brief summary of what might had happened, I requested the staff to call every branch to check, especially those located in Geylang area. “What’s his full name?” the receptionist asked me. “Shit! I don’t know!!” I cursed myself for forgetting to ask Amy earlier. Using their house phone, I called to the room and asked Amy for Lim’s full name. Giving it to the reception, I hastily urged him to call every branch to get them to check their guest register and to let us know which hotel and room no. that he’s checked in. Bingo, there was a person by his name checked into one of their hotels in Geylang. Confirming the location and room number, I then asked him to get the staff of that hotel to go immediately to the room to check on Lim, and also to seek help if necessary. Adrenalin pumping, I called the ladies and told them to come down immediately to the lobby. The receptionist called my mobile while we were on our way. Yes, it seemed that Lim really did attempt suicide by slashing his wrist. He’s semi conscious and was being attended to by their staff. The police and ambulance were already notified and were on their way. “Fuck! Now kena police case! Great! Just great!.....” I scarcastically congratulated myself. “Aiya, why he so stupid? Want to commit suicide?…..” I asked out loud to the ladies, “The police and ambulance are on the way there. You sure you really want to go?” I asked them. They were both too distraught to say anything and Amy was shivering with anxiety. “I tell you what. You better don’t go. You two go home first. I drop you here and you take a cab. I will go to the hotel and see. Wait if he see you, lagi tua tie chi…..” I said to them. “Now police case. Somemore the hotel also got my name and contact. They sure will call me and need to take my statement, Want to know how I know him, all this shit…..” I rattled, as the both of them got off. There was a crowd gathered outside the hotel when I arrived. Several police cars and an ambulance were parked right at the entrance. Informing an officer that I was the one who got the staff to check, he brought me to a sergeant, presumably the one in-charge. “How are you related to the subject?” the officer asked. “Er, friend…..” I replied, unsure of what else to say. “Friend? What kind of friend?” he asked, straightfaced. “What the fuck! Friend lah! What you mean what kind of friend? How else do you expect me to answer?? My lover, is it??” I mentally screamed at him. “Actually, he’s a friend’s friend. I don’t really know him that well….” I stammered. “What’s your name?” he then asked. I passed him my identity card so that he could record my particulars. “So you want to tell me what happened?.....” he asked, returning my ID. Just then, I saw the medics’ stretcher Lim out and load him into the ambulance. His eyes were closed and he was wrapped in a blanket up to his neck. There was a murmuring among the crowd. “Wah, murder case is it?…..” an ah pek was heard asking his friend. “Maybe, the kuay want to steal his money?” another one suggested. “Aiya, maybe he want to soot her kar chng, she say cannot. So he den try to force her, but suay suay he kena lor…..” yet another asshole deduced, extremely creative in his imagination. What a pathetic bunch of fucking idiots, I thought to myself….. I gave a brief account to the sergeant and was told that I needed to go to the police station to provide a more detailed statement. “Congrats! So now, you’ve got to tell the police that you were in a hotel room with two sisters while one of their boyfriends tried to kill himself because you were fucking his girl. Correct?.....” my inner voice taunted me, as I was driving. “No, that’s not all!” he continued tormenting, “You’ve also got to tell them that you were looking forward for a threesome! That’s why you went out to buy condoms when they got the text message…..” he sniggered. Wow, this is a side of my inner voice that I’m feeling for the first time and this bugger can be even more evil than the devil in me. All I could hear from the evil one then, was just a soft whimper….. Sigh, just when I thought that things were seemingly back to normal, this had to happen….. Coming up next – “What started out as friendship has grown stronger…..”
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bro Chan, great work !!
your story is easily one of the best in town as well as in this forum. first, your storyline is great, very down to earth and very unusual, a very well written one and its like coming from a soft porn movie script director. i like the frankness you described yourself at the beginning and love the way you express your personal feelings with the devil and angel within you which makes me feel the same when i am in some situations similar to yours, which i had encountered on and off. your singlish dialogue with all the parties tickles me all the time, cute n funny n your melayu is BOLEH TAHAN ah! then i like the songs that you add to the flavor, which gels with me very well as all the songs are meaningful to your situation and thats how i apply on my own when i fling around, me, being a devil too. heh heh. Kudos to you!! who said sinKapor has no "LT" = Local Talent!!!! cheers and look forward to your next episode!! |
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si bei drama... but I LIKE !!!!
who said we dun have good script writer ??? this is world class... as the story goes on and on, can film into a new SG drama show, as long as the taiwan 爱.... power !! |
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bro boob_man, i just thought of this, this morning. maybe you should submit your story to Royston Tan. Ask him to produce a film using your story. He does well in untouched areas of writing and stories. i think he sure like it and want to produce one.
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Bro, ur story getting more thrilling. Tks.
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One of the best stories I've read.
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Looks like this Lim character is a real loser and a killjoy as well; spoilt a perfect scenario of a barnstorming 3-some with 2 sisters....
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Maybe ah chan, u go be scriptwriter better lols! Seriously nuting much from what I have read here can beat ur story! Kudos to u! I dunnoe how to up points if not sure to give u all,
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the twist is really nice... you are are a good writer.
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