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西北怪郎
12-12-2005, 11:22 AM
Uncle Dnat is old liao.. so he ask me to write a poem on him and his life..... what do you people think of it huh? pls feel free to comment on it. :)

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What do you see nurses, what do you see?

Are you thinking when you are looking at me
A crabbit old man, not very wise,
Uncertain of habit, with faraway eyes,
Who dribbles his food and makes no reply
When you say in a loud voice --I do wish you'd try

Who seems not to notice the things that you do
And forever is losing a stocking or shoe,
Who unresisting or not, let you do as you will
With bathing and feeding, the long day to fill

Is that what you are thinking, is that what you see,
Then open your eyes, nurses, you're not looking at me.

I'll tell you who I am as I sit here so still,
As I do at your bidding, and I eat at your will,
I am a small child of ten with a father and mother,
Brothers and sisters who love one another,

A young boy of 16 with wings on his feet
Dreaming that soon now a lover he'll meet;
A bridegroom at 20 -- my heart gives a leap,
Remembering the vows that I promised to keep

At 25 now I have young of my own
Who need me to build a secure, happy home;
A man of 30 my young now grow fast,
Bound to each other with ties that should last,

At 40 my young sons have grown and are gone;
But my woman's beside me to see I don't mourn;
At 50, once more babies play around my knee.
Again we know children, my loved one me

Dark days are upon me, my wife is dead,
I look at the future, I shudder with dread,
For my young are all rearing young of their own
And I think of the years and the love that I've known.

I'm an old man now and nature is cruel
'tis her jest to make old age look like a fool.
The body it crumbles, grace and vigor depart,
There is now a stone where once was a heart

But inside this old carcass a young boy still dwells
And now and again my battered heart swells
I remember the joys I remember the pain,
And I'm loving and living life over again.
I think of the years all too few - gone too fast,
And accept the stark fact that nothing can last.

So open your eyes, nurses open and see
Not a crabbit old men look closer - see me.

DNAT
12-12-2005, 12:28 PM
Uncle Dnat is old liao.. so he ask me to write a poem on him and his life..... what do you people think of it huh? pls feel free to comment on it. :)
他妈的 I will ask Big Sexy to send you lawyer letter :mad:

noname123
12-12-2005, 02:24 PM
他妈的 I will ask Big Sexy to send you lawyer letter :mad:

Old tio old lah....dare not admit meh....buay steady one...:D

acer3939
12-12-2005, 02:39 PM
他妈的 I will ask Big Sexy to send you lawyer letter Being old is not a crime keke:D

oakleyeug
12-12-2005, 03:07 PM
Being old is not a crime keke:D


Being old and wise is still not a crime but being old and a humsiap lo is.... Juz a joke haha... But the poem is funny man

西北怪郎
12-12-2005, 04:55 PM
hmm... of course la.. being old is not a crime... every body will get old mah.. but then hor...those not very old but look very old (chao lau) wan... this one we must write poem for them.. kee kee... u know who i am talking abt or not huh ???:D

Being old is not a crime keke

FUCKYOU
12-12-2005, 05:11 PM
like someone say.. old is old , but Sometime.. and only sometime still can :D

but most of the time.. cannot liao :D

OSF.
12-12-2005, 06:11 PM
Nice Poem, keep it up bro :D

Microsoft
12-12-2005, 11:53 PM
他妈的 I will ask Big Sexy to send you lawyer letter

Err.... how bout sending a will instead?? :D :p

西北怪郎
13-12-2005, 07:42 AM
hahahha Dnat kenna suan by the young and handsome MS :D

btw uncle i got song for you also.... sing to jingle ball..(Merry Christmas)

Dnat balls, Dnat balls
hanging on the wall. :D

Err.... how bout sending a will instead??

mebirdie
13-12-2005, 08:09 AM
Old is Old

But as long as you still have the strength, do not waste your time in cheonging.

You may not know when you are not able to stand anymore
:D

ol'coyote
13-12-2005, 08:43 AM
Uncle Dnat is old liao.. so he ask me to write a poem on him and his life..... what do you people think of it huh? pls feel free to comment on it. :)


wow...really well written...
an original poem ?...

noname123
13-12-2005, 09:03 AM
Why Uncle Nat Nat tiam tiam har....dare not come out and face liao...:D

FUCKYOU
13-12-2005, 10:35 AM
huh? u mean Nat nat is the lau tiko hum siap luo??? pls wait.. i go bring my loud speaker and announce to the forum :D

DNAT IS A LAU TIKO :D
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Being old and wise is still not a crime but being old and a humsiap lo is....

DNAT
13-12-2005, 10:50 AM
Why Uncle Nat Nat tiam tiam har....dare not come out and face liao...:D
face jit ki tua lan lah ... today I got free lunch hor, dun spoil my makan mood hor ;)

DNAT
13-12-2005, 10:52 AM
KNN, this is a 无聊,放狗屁 thread ... :mad:

Microsoft
13-12-2005, 11:03 AM
hahahha Dnat kenna suan by the young and handsome MS [/COLOR]

Psst... I m older and pi Uncle D lagi jiow.... But then hor... at least i admit. KEKEKEKE :D :D

Zhumimi
13-12-2005, 04:33 PM
Pple always think i'm 18 lei...:D

vaxvms
13-12-2005, 04:47 PM
他妈的 I will ask Big Sexy to send you lawyer letter :mad:

wow why so hot har?
must no tau liang?:D

DNAT
13-12-2005, 05:00 PM
Pple always think i'm 18 lei...:D
朱咪咪 was one of the famous / very popular singer in Sg in the 70s .. together with others such as 凌宵

:)

DNAT
13-12-2005, 05:03 PM
wow why so hot har?
must no tau liang?:D
paiseh leh, just went to Blk 115 JBM last month .. forgot to jio you :o

no lah, just de seow seow wif Big Sexy's associates ...

西北怪郎
13-12-2005, 05:06 PM
another prove that you are old :D

朱咪咪 was one of the famous / very popular singer in Sg in the 30s .. together with others such as 凌宵


As usual a singaporean lau tiko displays his tiko characteristics....bigoted
and not very bright....kee kee :D

KNN, this is a 无聊,放狗屁 thread

西北怪郎
13-12-2005, 05:07 PM
sorry double post! must be the nat nat effect.. :(

Zhumimi
13-12-2005, 05:39 PM
朱咪咪 was one of the famous / very popular singer in Sg in the 70s .. together with others such as 凌宵


wah...i knw u are a fan of me...:D

sexlover
14-12-2005, 12:32 PM
朱咪咪 was one of the famous / very popular singer in Sg in the 70s .. together with others such as 凌宵

Aiyo Uncle D, u like that leak out your age in open forum liao. :D

Pls take note my signature.

vaxvms
14-12-2005, 02:14 PM
paiseh leh, just went to Blk 115 JBM last month .. forgot to jio you :o

no lah, just de seow seow wif Big Sexy's associates ...

115 no jio nvm
drinkin better call me
when the next one?
been monthssss nvr sing songs in singapore liao

DNAT
14-12-2005, 02:16 PM
sorry double post! must be the nat nat effect.. :(

too many nicks (accounts) in SB is like that one, dun blame me lah

Oh ya, I saw you yesterday around 4pm at Botanic Garden ... I got picture to prove


http://www.uploadraid.com/uploads/dac3c70879.jpg

DNAT
14-12-2005, 02:18 PM
115 no jio nvm
drinkin better call me
when the next one?
been monthssss nvr sing songs in singapore liao
ok, if got drinkin with WPP, I will jio u along ya ... :)

FUCKYOU
14-12-2005, 03:27 PM
wowlau nat nat.. u like that display his photo in public good meh?

ok i display your photo also. :D

http://www.artlex.com/ArtLex/uv/images/ugly_guyshead.jpeg


Oh ya, I saw you yesterday around 4pm at Botanic Garden ... I got picture to prove

DNAT
14-12-2005, 04:14 PM
Aiyo Uncle D, u like that leak out your age in open forum liao. :D

Pls take note my signature.

never mind lah, a lot of ppl also know I this year 4 pieces no change liao :D