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Reverend
17-04-2009, 12:23 AM
Instead of writing a story that happened, I would like to write a story that I am planning to happen. A revenge that is going to take place and all the people involved are real in person. I am going to tell u what happened and what leads to the things that I am going to do to them. I am not asking for pts or I am faking all these. What happened to me for the last few days compel me to write this as a venue to vent out my frustration.
“Well, that’s settles everything. We will start the operation once everything is in place. Good job, Dan.” I shook my lawyer hands and got my PA to see him off. Sitting back on my chair, I look out of the window. Thinking, for 3 years I had worked my ass off to make sure I got myself into a position that will enable me to take my revenge on her and that asshole boy friend of hers. I will call her YT and AS for short.
My deep thought was interrupted by a gentle knock on my door. My PA came to inform me that Dan is off and ask me if there were any more instructions for her. I looked at her and grin….she immediately got the idea and walked into the room and locked the door behind her.
“Lin, I want you to crawl to me.” She dropped down on her fours and started to crawl to me as seductively as she can possibly do. Swinging her ass as she crawls, looking at me with her sultry eyes. She made her way under my desk and started to unzip my pants. She started to lick my dick as she was licking a ice cream stick. I didn’t make a mistake hiring her. She has excellent skills at work and off work. As she was enjoying my dick, I reached down to her blouse and started to play with her big boobs, I am always a sucker for boobs. They were soft and big, just like YT. YES, YT the moment I thought of her and all the things she did to me. I roughly pulled Lin up and turn her around. I forcefully pulled her office skirt down and ripped off her black lacy panties. And just enter her in one forceful stroke, she murmured a faint cry as she knows that there are still people working outside.
I grabbed her boobs and started to pump her as hard as I can. Rage started to take over me. I was thinking more n more about YT. This made me felt even madder. I pushed Lin against the window and start to pump her even harder, I grab a handful of her hair and her head was pulled back as much as she can. And all these while, all she can is to restraint herself from crying out loud. One hand on her hair and with the other I was squeezing the life out of her boobs.
I feel that I was coming and in one swift motion, I turn her around and pressed her down. As the feeling is uncontrollable, I shaft my dick covered with her pussy fluid into her mouth and shoot my load down her throat. I pushed her head as deep as she can. She was choking and her eyes filled up with tears. But she still make the effort to start sucking my dick, cleaning it as my dick finished ejaculating my last sperm into her mouth. She clean my dick with her tongue with much detail.
I sat back on my chair and she crawled over to tidy up my pants and help me zip up. She began to tidy herself up, took her ripped panty and stuffed it into her pocket on her jacket. She composed herself and looked at me. I told her that there is nothing else and she can leave, when she was about to leave to room. I called her, “ Lin, I had approved your raise. Check your pay slip next month. You should see a figure that you like.” Her eyes brightens up and said “Thank you so much, Mr. Tan!” I quickly turn into a frown and she immediately replied “ Sorry, I meant Thank you master, I am your slave and your wish is my command”. This reminded her that she was to address me as master when we are alone. I gave her a gesture to get out, she scoots off as fast as she could.
Now, I am thinking what is going to happen when I start my revenge on those two tomorrow. I have everything in place and its time to carry it out……………

oOoLyRrAdoOo
17-04-2009, 02:40 AM
What the hell are you writing i dunno.
And one look,i know i am not interested to continue reading...
Disorganized...:mad:

Lubber.duckie
17-04-2009, 02:52 AM
Bro, its either u are a psycho or u watch too much porn :rolleyes::rolleyes:

makpoke
17-04-2009, 04:55 AM
sorry reverend, you better stick to the seminary, cos your writing skills sucks. Perhaps it will be better if you wrote a normal story in old English eg."Thy Rod is strong. Thou art cometh~!!"

Xgenre
17-04-2009, 07:13 AM
I think your writing is fine. Do learn to use paragraphs as it aids the reading process.

veggielover
17-04-2009, 08:28 AM
Looks like copied from some erotic stories in the net.. :(

boxingman
17-04-2009, 11:31 AM
No head no tail,look like cut from somewhere....

Love2BSuck
17-04-2009, 01:04 PM
What TS trying to write is like a novel. Till now what TS trying to interpret can be understood if bros really take the time and patience to read & digest slowly.

I am sure TS will be able to come out with the rest of the plot soon. :)

Keep it up TS!

Camping here.

et911
17-04-2009, 01:14 PM
I thought TS has used a different style of starting his story. Not too bad I would say. Do carry on.

ManInAction
17-04-2009, 03:10 PM
sound saddist..but interesting....TS had waited for 3 years and living in anger just to make sure he had his last laugh....just like tawain series....shall camp here...

dare u
17-04-2009, 03:40 PM
I have no idea what you are trying to tell or do?? Are you telling us a story that had happen already like the others post or telling us the future that you going to do what....??? You got some good imagination there....

geckoSG
17-04-2009, 03:45 PM
Let me check my understanding...

A lawyer asked to execute some sort of legal plan...

His secretary is a slave for him for money...

His revenge plot against a woman and her BF...

Not forgetting...

His poor use of paragraphing...

His fantasy of being a high ranking position...

His motive of asking for points... LOLz...

:D

liberatte
17-04-2009, 06:41 PM
TS, you write as though the events already happened when the event is gonig to take place.

Anyhow, give us all a background on what's happening first. Then i think lots of brothers here have ideas on how to make 'her' pay.

izerkudie
17-04-2009, 06:51 PM
camping here..more n more

liberatte
17-04-2009, 07:07 PM
camping here..more n more

Bro, you actually understand?

spidery
17-04-2009, 07:17 PM
lol TS, dun watch too much porn man.. Haha

Reverend
18-04-2009, 10:31 AM
To everyone out there, I do apologies for my poor writing skills. I am not an expert in this area and my writing skill is rather elementary. As for the background of this story, I had known her for more than 6 years.

We stayed together when I was stationed overseas 6 years back. We had an on, off distance relationship. She had a boyfriend and I had my marriage, but its only recently I went back to see her and that’s when I decided to be with her. As I was going to be outstation for a long period of time away from my wife.

She is not those that brings you to shopping and burn a hole in your pocket. She paid for her own air tickets and shop at those simple places, there was this time I brought her into Tiffany, she pulled me out immediately and scolded me for trying to waste money.

She broke off with her boyfriend whom she claims that she does not love and left with me. She stayed with me for 2 weeks but due to some visa problem, she returned back to her country and that’s where she started to behave strangely. She had been lying to me a lot and I do not know why.

Just last week, she told me that she wanted to have a time out. And after pressing further, she told me that she is returning back to her boyfriend because he promised her an apartment. And she will come back to me once she got the apartment.

I know that some of the guys out there think I am childish, I really do not understand why I felt so cheated and miserable too. All I can think of right now, is how to get back at them.

And I am starting the story at the moment I start my revenge on them.
If you guys think I am wasting your time. I shall stop and bother you guys no more. And go ahead to zap, I really dun care about points.

Angelsonline
18-04-2009, 11:58 AM
Is this revenge really that important to you? Will the revenge bring you the joy or love or good feelings you once have?

You are just a sad case to me.

Johnvirgo
18-04-2009, 12:19 PM
Instead of writing a story that happened, I would like to write a story that I am planning to happen. A revenge that is going to take place and all the people involved are real in person. I am going to tell u what happened and what leads to the things that I am going to do to them. I am not asking for pts or I am faking all these. What happened to me for the last few days compel me to write this as a venue to vent out my frustration.
“Well, that’s settles everything. We will start the operation once everything is in place. Good job, Dan.” I shook my lawyer hands and got my PA to see him off. Sitting back on my chair, I look out of the window. Thinking, for 3 years I had worked my ass off to make sure I got myself into a position that will enable me to take my revenge on her and that asshole boy friend of hers. I will call her YT and AS for short.
My deep thought was interrupted by a gentle knock on my door. My PA came to inform me that Dan is off and ask me if there were any more instructions for her. I looked at her and grin….she immediately got the idea and walked into the room and locked the door behind her.
“Lin, I want you to crawl to me.” She dropped down on her fours and started to crawl to me as seductively as she can possibly do. Swinging her ass as she crawls, looking at me with her sultry eyes. She made her way under my desk and started to unzip my pants. She started to lick my dick as she was licking a ice cream stick. I didn’t make a mistake hiring her. She has excellent skills at work and off work. As she was enjoying my dick, I reached down to her blouse and started to play with her big boobs, I am always a sucker for boobs. They were soft and big, just like YT. YES, YT the moment I thought of her and all the things she did to me. I roughly pulled Lin up and turn her around. I forcefully pulled her office skirt down and ripped off her black lacy panties. And just enter her in one forceful stroke, she murmured a faint cry as she knows that there are still people working outside.
I grabbed her boobs and started to pump her as hard as I can. Rage started to take over me. I was thinking more n more about YT. This made me felt even madder. I pushed Lin against the window and start to pump her even harder, I grab a handful of her hair and her head was pulled back as much as she can. And all these while, all she can is to restraint herself from crying out loud. One hand on her hair and with the other I was squeezing the life out of her boobs.
I feel that I was coming and in one swift motion, I turn her around and pressed her down. As the feeling is uncontrollable, I shaft my dick covered with her pussy fluid into her mouth and shoot my load down her throat. I pushed her head as deep as she can. She was choking and her eyes filled up with tears. But she still make the effort to start sucking my dick, cleaning it as my dick finished ejaculating my last sperm into her mouth. She clean my dick with her tongue with much detail.
I sat back on my chair and she crawled over to tidy up my pants and help me zip up. She began to tidy herself up, took her ripped panty and stuffed it into her pocket on her jacket. She composed herself and looked at me. I told her that there is nothing else and she can leave, when she was about to leave to room. I called her, “ Lin, I had approved your raise. Check your pay slip next month. You should see a figure that you like.” Her eyes brightens up and said “Thank you so much, Mr. Tan!” I quickly turn into a frown and she immediately replied “ Sorry, I meant Thank you master, I am your slave and your wish is my command”. This reminded her that she was to address me as master when we are alone. I gave her a gesture to get out, she scoots off as fast as she could.
Now, I am thinking what is going to happen when I start my revenge on those two tomorrow. I have everything in place and its time to carry it out……………
yo man, how would u like to record your revenge, and slowly browse it? do pm me and i might help.

bangbangben
18-04-2009, 12:49 PM
give TS some credit ba...

Given the amount of hate and anger bottled up in him, he needs to find a safe place to explode...

I guess he's filled with much excitement since the act is taking place soon...

TS, maybe you could start by writing the past happening of YT and AS. This would put all readers here in a better position to understand your story fully.

Blackstar
19-04-2009, 02:15 AM
this story is nice it all that matters to me....

erkianpeng
19-04-2009, 11:45 AM
I suggest you go read "My Auntie and I" to see how to write a real solid story that everybody likes to read.

chowweikong.sg
19-04-2009, 12:20 PM
yo man, how would u like to record your revenge, and slowly browse it? do pm me and i might help.

Bro

How u intend to help him to record. Can share some tips ?